Confessions of the deceived
Dear Diary,
I have a confession to make. Yesternight, I was
lured by Sirrah Borachio to meet with him at my lady's chambers, he convinced
me to wear Lady Hero’s gown and embrace him by the window. I was cruelly
deceived into believing he was fond of me but in actuality, used me in his
lord’s, Don John, plan to sabotage my lady’s wedding. This is not a confession
of my part in the scheme that night, this is my confession of love for Sirrah
Borachio. Due to my unconditional love for him, I wish to convey my broken
heart for what he hath done to me. It hurts all the more that I truly cared for
him and he deceived me without a second thought. Sirrah Borachio, if thou are
reading this, I hope you realize the pain thou has put me through and feel the
guilt weighing down on thy.
Yours truly,
Margaret
Dearest Margaret
ReplyDeletehow could thou of let love lead you in to such a deceiving lie? thou shall never trust Borachio again. He mislead thou and broke your heart and does not deserve to have thou love for him. His scheme brought dishonour to your house of work, and thou do not deserve the shame that was brought upon thou. do thou believe thou could ever regain his trust? What would he have to do?
This post was thorough and easy to read. The content and grammar where excellent! The only thing that could be better is maybe make it a little bit longer.
BenedickP2
Margaret I can not believe that you succumbed to this trickery. He is not in love with you my dear this was all a plot to ruin Hero's relationship. I get that you must be feeling really guilty but you should of known better then to sleep around with one of Don John's men. I honestly can't believe this I really thought you were something special Margaret. I did find the post easy to read though and it was a good length.
ReplyDeleteBalthasar p2
Dearest Margaret,
ReplyDeleteI hath already apologized to thee regarding my beguiling behaviour through means of a blog post, but I shall take this opportunity to repeat myself. From the depths of my heart, I sincerely regret using you in that manner, and you can be assured that I am drowning in my guilt. I am unsure that I will be able to carry on if thou remain heartbroken and do not forgive me. On the topic of the layout of your post, I found it a good length (and the grammar was good), however the font was a bit difficult to read.
--- Borachio (& Conrade), P2